COUNTER ARGUMENT:
Despite the fact that the internet spreads misinformation.
AUTHOR’S OPINION:
The internet is excellent for democracy.
REASON 1
The internet permits us to exercise freedom of speech.
REASON 2
The internet gives us
a variety of opinions we can choose from for exercising our own critical
thinking through education.
Despite the fact that the internet spreads
misinformation, the internet is excellent for democracy. The internet permits
us to exert freedom of speech, and also gives us a variety of opinions we can
choose from for using our own critical thinking through education.
Internet brings a lot of misinformation, Fitzgerald
(1997) stated that “No one knows how much misinformation occurs on the
internet, but identified types include incomplete information, pranks,
contradictions, out-of-date information, improperly translated data, software
incompatibilities, unauthorized revisions, factual errors, biased information and
scholarly misconduct” (p. 9), and people have to weigh the information for
finding out about credibility or not. But, even though the internet brings much
misleading information, it is also good for students and different kinds of
people who use it as a great tool for studying, working, housekeeping,
medicine, and many other jobs around the globe. In Sweden for instance, they
are running a study every year (“The swedes and the internet,” 2014) in which
they mention it as “Internet is the most important source of information” (para.
2). In this study they are analyzing and showing how internet usage is
important for people in the country. For example, they are using the internet
in fields from looking up words or searching for facts, school and education,
culture science and literature, health and medical information. The internet
is now used by many people, but there are some who think that the internet is
not good for students since it does not give the students the opportunity of
thinking and solving problems more objectively. Some claim that internet is not
good due to misinformation given to the whole world; they say it is based on
fake news and false information, and also on violence found in the internet.
The internet begins with the development of electronic
computers in the 1950s. However, the internet appeared in the 1980s as the World
Wide Web, but it continued developing through the time and in the mid-1990s it
made a great impact on technology, commerce and culture. It also has had impact
on near-instant communication by emails, messaging, telephone calls, video
calls, forums, blogs, social networking, and online shopping. Even though the
prior mentioned benefits of the internet, there are some people who say that the
internet is negative because of bad usage exerted by certain people through
Facebook, Twitter, Linkedin, Google +, You Tube, and Pintrest for example. The
hegemony of these social media is influencing humanity. There are many people
who are using them to do bullying or attacking others showing even violence in
certain ways.
As more people around the world gain
access ..., the internet will play a greater
role in everyday life. And so far, people in emerging and developing nations
say ... use of the internet has been a good influence in the
realms of education, personal relationships and the economy. But despite all
the benefits of these new technologies, on balance people are more likely to
say that the internet is a negative rather than a positive influence on
morality, and they are divided about its effect on politics. (“Internet seen as
positive…….negative on morality in…….developing nations,” 2015) (para. 1)
Internet is excellent for democracy since it permits
us to exercise freedom of speech. The internet is a great tool for democracy
because it serves for many things in different matters. For example, this aid
empowers people and helps them to raise their voices. Those activists can use
this gadget to protest against those who are doing things they think are not
fair. Corruption and anything which is against the law can be showed through
this instrument in order to alert others about bad things done by incorrect
individuals. The internet was not used as much as it is used today; years ago
the percentage of users were low, but nowadays it has increased exponentially
since today it is 40 times higher than at the beginning. These days many
changes have occurred in terms of ICT which have revolutionized the world. Many
countries that are democratic and even those which are not also have taken some
jumps into technology. Countries such as England, China, Russia and some others
have dabbled in the ICT.
THE
INTERNET AND DEMOCRACY
Thus
one kind of innovation that the Internet might bring to politics has been
managerial. It has been linked ...,
even in established democracies, is too dominated by outdated and out-of-touch
bureaucracies. This viewpoint is expressed both by individuals and by companies ... of contact with government agencies...
Those
who argue along these lines believe that the new technology will also open up... administration will become more transparent, and more
amenable to democratic pressures. This will lead to a virtuous circle of
increasing transparency leading to greater efficiency and then to greater
democracy... for reform at
both the national and local levels, namely simply bringing administration
closer to the people.
Others
wishing to apply benefits to government ... The Internet offered an opportunity for improving local government
services, and also possibly a new way for ordinary citizens to participate more
directly in the decisions that will affect their immediate living conditions. (Ferdinand, 2013, p. 5)
The E-democracy has come to stay and to help people to
have freedom of speech. At this moment one can say that e-democracy is getting
into society through all Social media sites and people are taking advantage of
it by giving opinions, informing and getting information about democratic
issues and a so forth quantity of beneficial items pro democracy. However, the
opposing side also exists and is present in the form of anti-democratic
participation which argues that e-democracy takes people to opinion
polarization, demagoguery and populism. Democracy has
been exercised in different ways since Romans and Greeks; even though it has
had many changes or transformations throughout different regions of the globe. For
instance, there exist many kinds of democracies beginning with the Anticipatory
democracy to Workplace democracy which means a number of more or less than 48
different ones.
ABOUT THIS BOOK
The internet opens up new opportunities for citizens ... that established political, social and economic interests can use to extend their powers. Will the internet revolutionize politics? The Prospect of Internet Democracy is a rich and detailed exploration of ... and communication technologies (ICTs) for democratic theory. Focusing in particular on ... among citizens, interest groups and political institutions, the authors examine whether the internet's impact on democratic politics is destined to repeat the ... history of other innovative ICTs. The volume explores the likely long- term effects of such uses on the conduct of politics in the USA and other nations that declare themselves modern democracies and assesses the extent to which they help or hinder viable democratic governance. (Margolis and Moreno-Riaño, 2009) (para. 1)
The internet opens up new opportunities for citizens ... that established political, social and economic interests can use to extend their powers. Will the internet revolutionize politics? The Prospect of Internet Democracy is a rich and detailed exploration of ... and communication technologies (ICTs) for democratic theory. Focusing in particular on ... among citizens, interest groups and political institutions, the authors examine whether the internet's impact on democratic politics is destined to repeat the ... history of other innovative ICTs. The volume explores the likely long- term effects of such uses on the conduct of politics in the USA and other nations that declare themselves modern democracies and assesses the extent to which they help or hinder viable democratic governance. (Margolis and Moreno-Riaño, 2009) (para. 1)
The internet gives us a variety of opinions we can
choose from for exercising our own critical thinking and all of this through
education. When someone gets into the World Wide Web (www.) needs to have a
very deep critical thinking due to misinformation and fake news given through
this medium. But, besides those perturbations and distractions found into the
web, there are also many things the internet is useful for. As a matter of
fact, internet is a great source of not only information, but also a fountain
of knowledge. It serves to investigate, do research, learn, and get all kinds
of literacy for people’s development and growth. It is said in the abstract of
a study done;
Abstract
The
growth of the Internet in the world provides many opportunities to many people
around the world in many different ways. When students are considered, the use
of the Internet is mainly for social and entertainment purposes. However, it is
very obvious that the Internet provides not only social connection and
entertainment, but also academic and scientific information as well.
Additionally, the Internet can be used as a tool to learn the latest news ... such as learning more information about a hobby or health.
Therefore, it can be said ..., it is vitally important
to encourage students to use this invaluable source to get any kind of
information they need in their academic studies. For the reasons mentioned
above, the aim of this study is look at the students‟ use of Internet in their
academic studies. (Nazan Dogruer, Ramadan Eyyam, Ipek Menevis, 2011, p. 606)
So, one could say that the internet has many applications in everyday
people’s lives. Besides some claims from certain people against internet usage
especially by youngsters, it can be said that the internet brings a lot of
benefits.
As a conclusion I can say that
even though internet spreads misinformation, it is excellent for exerting democracy.
It permits us to exert freedom of speech, and also gives us a variety of
opinions we can choose from for using our own critical thinking through
education.
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Dogruer, N., Eyyam, R., and
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Dear student,
ResponderBorrarYou have decided to center your paper on discussing the advantages that Internet brings in the exercise of democracy. You begin strongly by providing some general information concerning internet use and the benefits it brings to people in general. However, after reading the first two paragraphs, I get the feeling that associated concepts of the course are not sufficiently involved in the paper, and perhaps, you may fall short when going in-depth with your ideas. Therefore, I advise you to make a general outline with the main arguments that you want to express in your paper and the possible concepts that you may include to back up your ideas. As I told you in class, this paper does not only take your opinion as the most essential aspect to write about, but the development of strong arguments in regard to any issue from a critical perspective.
Keep working on your first draft (which by the way is not complete yet) and let me know when any other adjustment has been made.
Best regards,
Jhon Losada